Congratulations! You just received the job offer. However, as usual, the salary appears to be much lower than you had expected. You know, here is where you need to negotiate intelligently, without sounding greedy or burning bridges. You really want this job. Try this!
“Act as a negotiation expert. I’ve received a job offer for [Job Title] in [City]. The offered salary is [$X]. Based on my [Y] years of experience and industry data for this role and location, draft a polite and firm counteroffer. Include:
a short thank-you for the offer,
a clear counter figure [$Z],
a brief justification based on skills and market rates,
a respectful close that keeps the door open for further discussion.”
Role clarity – The AI is positioned as a negotiation coach, which guides the response toward strategy and tone, rather than just drafting text.
Variable inputs – By including salary, years of experience, and market data, the prompt ensures the email is realistic and specific.
Tone control – Specifying “polite and firm” balances assertiveness with professionalism.
Structure built-in – The four requested parts (thanks, counter, justification, close) provide a ready-made negotiation framework.
Confidence builder – Having a polished script reduces anxiety and helps you enter the discussion prepared.
Swap the format: ask for a talking points script instead of an email if negotiating live.
Apply the same framework to benefits negotiation (extra leave, flexible work, signing bonus).
Use in freelance/client work by changing context to project fees or retainers.
Subject: Excited to Discuss the [Job Title] Offer
Dear [Hiring Manager’s Name],
Thank you so much for the formal offer to join [Company Name] as the new [Job Title]. I was very impressed with the team during the interview process, and I am genuinely excited about the opportunity to contribute to [mention a specific goal or project, e.g., "the upcoming platform redesign"].
After carefully reviewing the offer, I would like to discuss the proposed compensation. Based on my 8 years of experience, the market rate in [City], and the significant value I am poised to deliver, I would like to propose a base salary of $155,000.
Building directly on our conversation about [mention the specific business problem, e.g., "early-stage customer churn"], I want to reiterate my commitment. My immediate priority will be to execute the strategy we discussed for [mention your specific promised outcome, e.g., "overhauling the client onboarding process to reduce churn by 20% within my first six months"].
Achieving this outcome alone will generate substantial value, and I am confident that this salary represents a strong investment that will deliver a significant and immediate return for [Company Name].
My excitement for this role and the challenges ahead remains incredibly high. I am confident we can find a final compensation package that is a win-win.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
You’ve successfully moved the negotiation from a standard market-rate discussion to a high-level, value-for-value business proposition. This is the hallmark of an expert negotiator. Send it with confidence.
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